For my second draft of my literacy narrative I had to change a few words and add in more commas. I think that I should have done a better job at reading over my paper and changing the repetitive-ness. I think that for the final draft I will have to re-write much of my paper and look for grammatical errors.
For the second draft of my proposal essay I had to add a few more paragraphs and site my sources. I also had to read over my paper and make sure that there were not any major grammatical errors.
I'm glad the review process helped you with your paper. You may want to include a little more detail in the reflection you write for your midterm portfolio though!
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